This Edinburgh postcard taken from Blackford Hill contains lines from the poem Marmion by Sir Walter Scott. It reads:
Blackford: on whose uncultured breast
Among the broom, and thorn and whin,
A tenant boy, I sought the nest,
Or listed as I lay at rest,
While rose on breezes thin,
The murmur of the city crowd.
The photographer was: W. & A. K. Johnston Limited, Edinburgh, Glasgow & London.
"Just a p.c. to ask if you are keeping all right now. trust you are I had Miss Houliston up to-night. She was asking kindly for you trust to hear from you soon." Tennie
Mr. A. G. Campbell
c/o Mrs. Moir
15 Cathcart Pl.
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Christina Campbell (1878 - 1948) wrote this postcard to her brother, A.G. Campbell, and posted it in Edinburgh on December 7, 1904. A.G. Campbell also lived in Edinburgh at this time. Presumably, he returned the postcard to her for her collection.
The message has an informal tone accomplished by removing the phrase 'this is' before 'just' and removing the pronoun 'I' before 'trust' which creates imperatives: Just a p.c. …, trust you are …, trust to hear …; the use of abbreviations: p.c.; lack of punctuation and initial word capitalization: … now. trust …, … you are I had …, … for you trust to hear ….; lack of salutation such as ‘Dear …’; Abrupt closure: trust to hear from you soon.
The message states that the p.c. is to ask after her brother’s well-being, and forward a message from a Miss Houliston who also was asking about her brother’s well-being. She chooses to insert a positive appraisal of Miss Houliston’s manner of inquiry contained in the word ‘kindly.’ She also states ‘I had Miss Houliston up to-night,’ rather than ‘Miss Houliston was up to-night.’ This allows Christina to be the possessor, the initiator, of the visit that took place. Miss Houliston is reduced to a subordinate position in Christina’s telling of the event.
Looking at the nouns and pronouns, which are the participants in this scenario, Christina refers to herself once in this missive: I. This single use places her in charge of the event that follows. She reduces her presence in the rest of the text by omitting ‘I’s’ and in so doing creates imperatives. These imperatives are mild and read more like directives than orders. She also removes herself from inquiry by personifying the p.c. and having it ask in her absence. These choices substantially reduce her role in this message with the exception of her leadership in having Miss Houliston up.
Christina refers to her guest twice: Miss Houliston, and she. There are 33 words in this message. The middle of this text would be the first reference to Miss Houliston. Often the meat of a message is concealed in the center of the text.
Christina makes four references to the recipient of this message – her brother: you (4). Use of 2nd person, you, is also an imperative – in this case, a directive.
So, Christina had the kindly Miss Houliston up and Miss H was asking after her brother’s well-being after which Christina took it upon herself to immediately notify (it’s still to-night) her brother and trust that he will respond soon. Words like trust, and kindly, are emotive. And the use of subtle directives suggest behaviour rather than demand it.
So, initially, Christina reduces her presence in the delivery of the message. Then she steps up with her single use of the pronoun 'I' and arranges Miss Houliston’s visit and appraises her query as kindly. And finally, she emotively directs her brother’s response to what has transpired and what is expected of him.
It appears there might be an element of informal matchmaking in this postcard.
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Linguistic notes: return address top right justified, sentences end with time reference: now, to-night, soon. Use of imperatives. Signed Tennie.